Tyranny Of Belief

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Yodasdad

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« Reply #15 on: January 13, 2019, 07:53:42 AM »
I started listening thinking, okay niiice vocal.
I ended listening thinking, wow, that's good!

It's actually a great vocal, well sung, lovely clarity.

Nice rising hook in I think the second line of the chorus.

Really well put together track without any unnecessary bells and whistles.

The ONLY thing I might suggest altering is the line starting cling to your rock, which felt ever so slightly squeezed in. Maybe clinging on would flow better?

Anyway, great stuff Tom.

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