Amazing star-quality vocals and a great idea for a song. Sounded really excellent. The sort of thing I imagine I'd hear on the radio if I ever listened to the radio
I loved the start and loved the end too...I thought it maybe drifted away from me a little in between...but that's nothing that should concern anyone...I'm not really a contemporary popular music kind of misery-guts!
You should find a route into pop stardom...perhaps by getting a part in a tv show, banging a glamorous celebrity and "reluctantly" selling your story, or winning a talent show judged by people without any. It'd mean having the soul sucked out of you with one of those mini-hoovers they use to collect all the spit when you're having a filling done at the dentists, but think of the money...not the rapid descent into drink and/or drug dependence, obscurity and, ultimately, oblivion.
Better still...stick with us. We all love you