[fischermans]

@lillypilly Thank you Lilly for your words.
@Cawproductions Thank you, made my day.
@montydog Hey Alan thank you for listening and for your comments. Means a lot.
@Movin Flavour Hey Sandeep, thank you so much.
@crystalsuzy Hello Suzy, yes it's been a long time. Good to hear that you still like my songs. 
Merry X-Mas to all of you.

[redrhodie]

I thought it was beautiful. The recording didn't really bother me. It feels like a live performance, honest and with heart.

I found myself longing for a chorus, with a melody that contrasts with the verses, with long sustained notes. A place for the ears to rest, and to contemplate everything you've said in the verses.

But it's lovely as it is.

Lynn

[MonnoDB]

@fischermans..  some interesting chords and lovely guitar playing. Agree that the vocal is clipping a bit and as Paulski says, ‘sorrow’ needs a change - either what Is suggested or ‘please no sorrow’ or ‘no more sorrow’. Your songs have a lovely mellow comforting feel to them Alexander. Great stuff!

[fischermans]

@redrhodie Lynn, you made my day, thank you so much.
@MonnoDB Karen, thank you for your words. I changed the lyrics in "Rise like a phoenix and no more sorrow"

[Skub]

Yo fischermans.

Love the song and your vocals.

The recording you have presented here sounds like a work in progress and for starters I'd be inclined to keep it simple.

Sometimes when I work on a song,I add loads of stuff,then over time I take the knife to most of it and only leave what the song demands. Your song is strong enough to be you and guitar alone.

[fischermans]

@Skub
You are totally right but I have always the problem that my knife is not sharp enough. Have to work on this. Thanks for listening.Alexander