Slava B. - Stress

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SlavaB

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« on: December 01, 2018, 11:10:47 AM »
Good time of the day ladies and gentleman’s,
Would like to introduce you another piece of work i was working on and now im hungry for your opinions on this.
Thank you in advance for listening and your time, i wrote this track when i was thinking about how people suffering from stress, what they feel, how they led to be stressed.


Lyrics :

Verse 1

Somebody upset you,
Something has gone wrong.
Can remember problems.
All leave me alone!
I dont want to speak
I dont want to talk
All the problem coming
Im drawn.
Pulse is up and down.
Nobody around,
Have you ever heared me?
Have you ever heared me?

NO!

Verse 2

Every day the same,
The problems has not gone.
They are coming in,
And never coming.
Please hold please hold on
I can not keep up.
Too many things are going now around,
Im now too weak,
I can not keep up.
Muscles getting weak,
Im falling in the ground

Chorus
All my problems just land on me,
Stress is beast, inside me.

Verse 3

Little little problem,
Little little face.
Making my day darker,
Then my second face.
Im growing beard,
Im growing haira.
All i want to cover is my second face.
Now you know my weakness,
Same as my strength.
Sick and twisted brain,
Twisted twister brain.

Chorus
« Last Edit: December 02, 2018, 09:50:00 AM by SlavaB »

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« Reply #1 on: December 01, 2018, 04:19:56 PM »
Man, your stuff is loud!

We've all been through this and you've picked out some of the main characteristics very nicely. Musically, it's not my thing but it is strangely compelling. Weirdly, I can see as the soundtrack to a scene in a lap dancing club. I have no idea why.

I think this is your best song yet. I love the quiet bit after 2:37 - truly wondrous.

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pompeyjazz

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« Reply #2 on: December 01, 2018, 05:34:10 PM »
I'm digging your heavier stuff @SlavaB This one really rawks  ;D Like the way you slip into half time now and again and intelligent use of synths. I thinks this is one of your best tracks so far as well and the production is sounding pretty damn good as well  :)

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« Reply #3 on: December 02, 2018, 09:53:20 AM »
Thank you very much gentleman’s, i appreciate your time for listening and writing feedback.

John would like to thank you for sharing this on SC.
Have a nice and creative days guys.

Best Regards.
Slava B.

PaulAds

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« Reply #4 on: December 02, 2018, 10:03:06 AM »
Well...you don't half get stuck into this, Slava!

"Brooding" is perhaps the word I would use...I watched "Hostel" the other night...and this reminded me of that for some reason.

It's a full-on sound and although it's a genre I'm pretty ignorant of...I always enjoy the visceral nature of your stuff.

Take no prisoners!
« Last Edit: December 02, 2018, 10:04:55 AM by PaulAds »
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SlavaB

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« Reply #5 on: December 03, 2018, 12:41:41 PM »
Hi PaulAds,

I must agree the sound is quite dark one, so possibly thats the reason it reminded you of a "hostel" film :) anyway thank you for listening, ive heared your collab song with John, great effort guys.

Thank you.
Best Regards,
Slava B.

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« Reply #6 on: December 03, 2018, 01:41:37 PM »
I think you definitely created an oppressive, stressy atmosphere with this. Great pounding headaches in the verses and some high anxiety in the chorus.


Perhaps my only comment would be that the lead guitar sounded a little too "nice" perhaps, not so much the tone as maybe playing too harmonically and some more dischord could add a little something extra? Just a thought.


Always good to hear some different styles on the forum.

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« Reply #7 on: December 04, 2018, 10:24:10 PM »
I loved the section from around 2:35 - the little mini guitar solo and then the breakdown and then the explosion back into it...
Well you know I love your stuff Slava.
I've got to confess since the last couple of tracks have gone a bit more 'hardcore', I'm still loving your voice and attitude but I also miss a little bit of the quirky Slavic feel you had with the first couple you posted here, that was sooo unique.  ("Kings Lynn" remains one of my favourite tracks I've ever heard on this forum!).  I remember you writing that some guy at one of your gigs told you to go more traditional hardcore - so I just wanted to redress the balance and say that I also thought your original more eccentric stuff was even more awesome because it was unlike anything I'd heard before.
This is still a joy though, I love the way you totally throw yourself into your songs.
It's all too beautiful.

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« Reply #8 on: December 05, 2018, 03:34:34 PM »
Yo Slav.

Absolutely banging backing track and very. very LOOOOUUUUD, I just need to push my speaker cones back in...

I reckon you have this style totally down. Great riffs, with matching baseline.

Vocal style is a bit quirky for me but I don't know a massive amount about this genre.

Sounds banging here


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« Reply #9 on: December 05, 2018, 05:34:58 PM »
For me this is your best song so far. The way it has been put together is superb. The interplay between the guitars and drums is superb. I think your vocal delivery could be a bit more aggressive but that's a minor gripe. It's a belter.

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« Reply #10 on: December 05, 2018, 10:24:37 PM »
It definitely rocks, love the intro. You do sound very angry though :)
Not my genre of music but it's a tight song.

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« Reply #11 on: December 07, 2018, 12:02:17 AM »
Well, I liked it. It has strength, the melody is repetitive and reaffirms the lyrics, I liked the mixture, in short, I enjoyed it and you have not stressed me
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