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Starboy and Moonman

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« Reply #16 on: November 21, 2018, 11:15:05 PM »
It is a beautiful story, a letter that creates delicious images in the mind carried by the hand for your soft and delicate interpretation, and when the theme opens from 1.18 it is even more beautiful. I liked it a lot. Your child could be a Wizard one day because with his questions he walks among the stars.
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« Reply #17 on: November 22, 2018, 04:35:37 PM »
Hi, I can only echo all the other comments, great vocals as usual. Lovely idea for a song.
Good stuff!
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« Reply #18 on: November 24, 2018, 11:21:24 AM »
Gawd bless the little fella...

What a super song...your vocals are always fantastic...but it's it's the story here that takes the biscuit for me.

Loads of great, fun lines and the wide-eyed innocence of the little guy's view of life is very refreshing.

Fabulous stuff, mate!
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« Reply #19 on: November 25, 2018, 04:20:39 PM »
Cute back story - X Factor would love that ...I could see tears in the audience and waving of hands as this one got going.....Plain plump middle aged women would fall in love with you as they showed a film of you cleaning windows as your son looks through the other side of the window.....its got winner written all over this one.

All joking aside........Lovely song - i have a heart a stone and it nearly got me going :)
One of the best i have heard for a while on here.

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« Reply #20 on: November 28, 2018, 12:45:03 AM »
@Yodasdad @Wicked Deeds @MonnoDB @RealKevM @pompeyjazz @moraamarolaloba @Jamie @Morefrog Jones @PaulAds

A huge thankYOU everyone for your positive feedback, I really appreciate it! I’m so happy that this very personal song seems to touch others aswell. You can’t hope for much more than that as a songwriter.😊👍🏻🙏🏻🎶

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« Reply #21 on: December 01, 2018, 02:55:06 PM »
Absolutely gorgeous writing, singing and playing. Man, are you ever wasted cleaning windows! I can only stand back and admire the talent and application here. Everything is perfect - I could just go on and on but others have covered it already.

Sublime. Made my day.

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« Reply #22 on: December 02, 2018, 01:45:23 PM »
Absolutely brilliant - can you imagine what this will mean to you both in 20 years? The danger with writing about our own (little, innocent) kids is that it ends up sounding a bit twee and sickly. But you have written a mini script for a fantasy adventure together and it's amazing! Your vocals, guitar and production do justice to a top, top drawer song. I was blown away!

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« Reply #23 on: December 04, 2018, 11:05:45 AM »
I am genuinely staggered at the beauty of this lovely..lovely song, Disney should make a movie just so they can use this song..and if you don't clean the moon who the heck does?...great lyrics.

Best, Kevin :)
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LostBoy

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« Reply #24 on: December 05, 2018, 09:57:22 AM »
@montydog @Bill Saunders @shadowfax

Ah man...thanks sooo much fellas, your feedback has totally made my day!! 😊🎶👊🏻🎶

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« Reply #25 on: December 05, 2018, 11:08:56 AM »
Hi Leo

Lovely song and a nice arrangement, top notch vocals as always, I like the way you have used the harmonies., try not to fall off the ladder, its a long drop from the moon!

Cheers, Mikey

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« Reply #26 on: December 08, 2018, 09:34:28 PM »
I would not change a thing, absolutely love this song for lots of reasons

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« Reply #27 on: December 09, 2018, 09:12:09 PM »
Beautiful and well crafted song.

Excellent vocals and production.

Great Lyrics.

Sandeep