[SlavaB]

Good Afternoon Ladies and Gentlemen's,

Would like to throw a track for your reviews to know your opinions. Im getting ready stuff for my new EP and this track will be a part of this EP, the idea was to record a track that would be easy listening one, but as usual in my style with some heavy guitar in it, the lyrics obviously isn't my strongest side but.. here we go . Please take a look at my work called "Fuel My Fire".

https://soundcloud.com/slavab/slava-b-fuel-my-fire/s-EwspD

Thank you.
Best Regards,
Slava B.


Lyrics :

Intro
In my dreams
In My dreams
I dont want to hear you
Something tickling my feets
Funny feelings i feel.
Verse 1
Please dont touch
Please dont touch my feelings
I dont want to hear you
I dont want to feel you
I dont want to leave tonight
I dont want to leave tomorrow
Please dont tell me nothing now
I just want postpone the moment
Verse 2
And your hand land on me
It was so soft
Shivers getting ready
To run through my body
Youve set a fire
in my eyes
Sparks are spread
You fuel my fire
Chorus
No no no you fuel my fire
Verse 3
MY second face
Has shown it self
I dont like to let it out
But you ignoring the humans being
And just keep pushing your thruth

[Paulski]

Hi Slava

I liked this - sounds like 80's synth Blondie only heavier with that low vocal.
One thing I noticed was your pronunciation of "fuel" sounded more like the word "fill" but "fill" works anyway so no worries there.

Good track for your EP IMHO
cheers
Paul

[pompeyjazz]

Hi Slava. I really like your unique style. This one really kicks you in the nuts with it's energy. Love the 80s synth pop and heavy guitar fusion. Might be my crappy headphones but it seemed to be maxing out a bit towards the end. Really enjoyed it. Let us know when you're releasing an album 

[moraamarolaloba]

It's funny, your style that sounds so heavy also has something tribal for its strength and the insistence of the main melody. You're right, it's easy to listen to the song and it also moves your feet. However, it is a personal opinion, the final stanza of the lyrics takes me out of the story.

[montydog]

Hi,

This is different. Crazily this reminded me of Boney M and they had a load of hits. Not really my thing but I have to admire the originality and quirkiness.........Oh! those Russians!

M

[SlavaB]

Thank you all for your kind feedback.

@montydog ha ha, yeah thats what i thought about synth that it reminds me something and after you said Boney M. It kind of fits:D

Thank you.
Best Regards,
Slava B.

[Almosthumanrobot]

Hahah love the style dude!
Got that slav style going, but still pretty melodically cool.
Haven't heard something like this in a while, thanks for that!

[redrhodie]

Excellent. I love the lyrics "something's tickling my feets". Haha. Your songs always make me laugh. Love it. It's up to your high standard and most enjoyable.