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The Caged Bird

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Jamie

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« Reply #15 on: November 28, 2018, 11:47:20 AM »
Hi guys, very innovative sound and treatment. Enjoyable listen. Your stuff is normally very sparse so I was a bit taken by surprise, but in a good way!
Good stuff guys,enjoyed it.
Cheers
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« Reply #16 on: November 29, 2018, 06:02:40 AM »
Love hearing your voices together, really unique and engaging sound.


I remember these lyrics and I think the atmosphere and pace really Sever them well.


I lived all the subtle stuff in the background- the bass sounds great in particular. I too would like a breakdown somewhere maybe with just claps and vocals to bring out a key section - possibly the “cruel world” part.


Tremendous originality and a fantastic collaboration going on here.

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« Reply #17 on: November 29, 2018, 02:45:02 PM »
Love hearing your voices together, really unique and engaging sound.


I remember these lyrics and I think the atmosphere and pace really Sever them well.


I lived all the subtle stuff in the background- the bass sounds great in particular. I too would like a breakdown somewhere maybe with just claps and vocals to bring out a key section - possibly the “cruel world” part.


Tremendous originality and a fantastic collaboration going on here.
Thanks Adam

I must have been going for a poppy sound here.
I've a long way to go, learning by doing.
I'll not revisit this but apply good advice and new insights into future songs.
Some things are truly difficult to master and so very many aspects are to be considered.
I feel like I'm still improving and as long as I have that feeling I'm likely to be 'appy with things.

thanks for commenting, your tips are appreciated.
It's either this or that, then again it might be the other. 

I can promise you a future of slow decline.

Don't eat the yellow snow

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« Reply #18 on: November 30, 2018, 10:24:07 AM »
Interesting intro,  quite experimental with the bird sounds and orchestra warming up. The bird sounds remind me a little of the introduction favoured by The Beatles on 'Free As A Bird.'  Mostly, I am enjoying the unusual sounds and the blend of vocals on this track.  Perhaps ease of on the percussion a little.  Turn it down in the mix and allow the other more interesting sounds to shine through.  Bass is sounding cool but bring it to the forefront.

Paul