Easier in Love [ Lane Vincent melody and lyric]

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Lane1777

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« on: November 10, 2018, 03:40:08 AM »
a friend lost his girl, came over a little drunk and kept saying  it was easier in love..wrote this




Easier in love

tip`n this bottle a little to much
siting out on the curve of a red dirt road
things a little easier now your gone
I`m a little easier not holding -on...
tip the bottle, kick up dust, it was easier in love..

tip`n this bottle...reflections of
I am siting out on this blvd, watching planes lift-off..
things a little easier ..let Me clear that up..
i`m a little easier , though forgetting you is tough.
tip this bottle, kick up dust, it was easier in love..


its every little thing that made us
all of the everyday I love you`s
just the simple things
never thought would mean a thing...but they do


music bridge

its every little thing that made us
all of the everyday I love you`s
just the simple things
never thought would mean a thing...but they do.



tip`n this bottle a little to much
i can`t tell you I`m better off .....your not around...
i`m a little easier , that won`t mean alot.
this is still me... the better half gone..
tip this bottle, kick up dust, it was easier in love..
 it was easier in love..


"Grace always pours from a closing wound"

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« Last Edit: November 10, 2018, 04:12:56 AM by Lane1777 »

Yodasdad

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« Reply #1 on: November 10, 2018, 11:28:02 PM »
An accomplished track.

Some nice harmonic twists and turns and it's good to hear the structure not being verse/chorus (ass so many of mine are)

I like the rhythmic licence you take with the lyrics, although sometimes I think it is taken slightly too far and the lyrics feel slightly forced.

For me the instrumental bridge is a little too long, I'd trim that back personally, maybe halve it.

Nice delicate orchestration, as I said, an accomplished track.

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« Reply #2 on: November 15, 2018, 03:19:49 PM »
Hi Lane1777,

I thought this was absolutely gorgeous, magical and compelling. Give me a CD's worth please. Harmonica break maybe a bit thin sounding but otherwise a faultless, outstanding song. Beautiful, comfortable and natural vocal performance with a lovely subtle backing. Oh God...I loooooooove it!

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