Still Want You

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mahircankucuk

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« Reply #15 on: November 22, 2018, 07:45:34 PM »
Listening to the new recording.
The recording starts absolutely heartwarmingly. The vocals come so nicely too...

One little thing; When you say "go away" you give a long break between these words, making the listener wait for the word "away", it's a predictable word to be coming after a break, so I would wish you would sustain "go" and tie it with "away". Just a thought... ("Nothing to say but this" part doesn't have this issue for me, I love it)
The chorus is growing on me also... But you sing "oh" in "oh I do", it sounds a little too strong and treble driven for my taste.

Big fan of soulful chord progression and guitar playing, I need to re-emphasize that...

Thanks for the music

mikek

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« Reply #16 on: November 22, 2018, 08:03:41 PM »
Its not the performance I want yet....at this point I'm just trying to work out how I'm going to record it. Thanks for your comments.i will try dropping 'away' and see if I like It.
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mahircankucuk

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« Reply #17 on: November 22, 2018, 08:40:44 PM »
I didn't mean to say taking out the "away", but sustaining "go", so it will be tied with "away", eliminating the suspense that leads to the predictable word of "away".

Thank you

mikek

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« Reply #18 on: November 22, 2018, 09:13:59 PM »
Ah, misunderstood. Well,maybe I will try it each way