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Blaze Of Glory

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SFX

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« on: October 31, 2018, 12:15:32 PM »
Your eyes are locked, loaded on me

I know you're liking what you see

All is fair in love and war

So you've got nothing to answer for

 

You can do just what you want

I promise I'm not gonna abscond

I'm just gonna stay right here

Melting until I disappear

 

 Baby

You make me doubt my senses

Coz theres no way

I could ever feel

This wavy

Like I'm so high

Flying like a bird through the orange coloured sky

Choking on sunlight

 

 And now I'm going out in a blaze of glory

Baby touch my body

With fingers so hot, baby don't stop

You need to give me all you got

I want every one of your stories

My body's your territory

I can take it all, it's my protocol

Just shoot me like a cannonball

 

My body's aching, heads a maze

Baby gotta learn to navigate

One stroke too many, touch too far

And I'll be dripping down to Zanzibar

 

Once you start it you can't stop

Blast off like an astronaut

I'll show you the galaxy

You'll find the whole cosmos inside of me

 

Take me

Never wanted anything more

So sexy

And it's hard to do it

Silently

I'm calling out your name drowning in a sea

Of the passion that you bleed

 

 And now I'm going out in a blaze of glory

Baby touch my body

With fingers so hot, baby don't stop

You need to give me all you got

I want every one of your stories

My body's your territory

I can take it all, it's my protocol

Just shoot me like a cannonball

 

 I know, I know what you want

So go, so go, so go on, on

Don't ever, ever, ever stop

I think we're gonna need a mop´╗┐
« Last Edit: October 31, 2018, 02:06:02 PM by SFX »

TakeThisWaltz

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« Reply #1 on: November 07, 2018, 08:26:56 PM »
Has a lot of energy!

Bobby Burrows

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« Reply #2 on: November 17, 2018, 04:31:35 AM »
Lots of lyrics, lots, of lyrics.

How long is this song?

I fear you've over written this.

Furry61

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« Reply #3 on: November 22, 2018, 12:36:56 PM »
I agree with TakeThisWaltz, there is a lot of energy but that aside it is not particularly well structured, too cliche and no movement in the storyline.