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Cawproductions

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« on: October 10, 2018, 03:12:09 PM »
Hi guys.
Here's myself and Mikey's new track, Hope it appeals to some of the forum members.

Pin back your ears....

Lyrics are as follows:

So you’re leaving in the morning
They said I’ll never get you back
But I know your little secret
But Your no better than that……

You can’t hide….All the things that you said
You can’t hide….All those thoughts in your head
You can’t hide ….Like the tears of a bad dream
You can’t hide…..i’ll be right in your bloodstream

All those lies are gunna haunt you
They’ll be hiding as you sleep
and i’ll be sitting on your shoulder
you promises are harder to keep….

You can’t hide….All the things that you said
You can’t hide….All those thoughts in your head
You can’t hide ….Like the tears of a bad dream
You can’t hide…..i’ll be right in your bloodstream

So i’ll be waiting in your conscience
voices running round your head
when you’re staring at the ceiling
While you’re lying in your bed.

redrhodie

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« Reply #1 on: October 10, 2018, 08:04:05 PM »
Really good song, guys. I like the right in your bloodstream line. Makes me wonder if it's about a person or drugs. I like not knowing for sure. The singing and all the music sounds great. It's memorable, too. You got a keeper.

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« Reply #2 on: October 11, 2018, 09:35:10 AM »
F@ck yeah guys!!! This is smoooooth! Love it! Great job getting in and out in 3.35! That’s my Everest!! Great hooky chorus, brilliantly sung! Amazing production, but I don’t expect anything less from this outfit! ;)

My only thought was (& it was just a thought) that I wasn’t sure about the chord sequence u have under that hooky chorus, especially on the first chorus. (God knows what would go there instead! :D) it’s not that it doesn’t work....I just don’t know if it’s the best possible option?? Just a thought...is all, it really is a fab track and me and my baby girl loved our listens. :D

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« Reply #3 on: October 11, 2018, 11:18:22 AM »
IMO, this has got all the elements of a hit song guys  :) very hooky chorus indeed 8) Great vocals :-\  Awesome guitar 8)
a really well written/arranged song and very well produced  :)

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« Reply #4 on: October 11, 2018, 08:01:00 PM »
Hi all.

Thanks for taking a listen and commenting, Its great to get feedback on songs, even if people just take a listen and say it sounds good or bad, It tells me the my mix/master process has translated to other setups.

@redrhodie
Your comment got us taking a second look at the lyrics, yeh, they could be about a person struggling with drugs, I see that now, It was written about a girl.boy who cheated but the other person has some info that wouldn't be good if it got out.

@LostBoy
Cheers dude, appreciate the mix and vocal comments as you are the man for smooth vocals, I will never compete there. We would love to do a collab with you sometime..Hey the chord sequence..thruth be told, This song was adapted from a track that didn't work out with a singer I worked with. We stuck with the arrangement and wrote around it, Maybe not the best way. Pleased you like the listen,

@crystalsuzy
Really pleased you liked the elements in the track, and that all important catchy hook.

Myself and @Mikey would like to thank all that take the time to listen and comment.

Thanks
Andy

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« Reply #5 on: October 11, 2018, 08:25:17 PM »
Top notch stuff guys. Excellent playing, vocals and production. I particularly like the acoustic guitar that underpins the whole track. Keep em coming guys  :)

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« Reply #6 on: October 12, 2018, 11:59:02 AM »
Do you know, I just wanted to say how tasty the acoustic guitar production was , and then I read pompey jazz's post, rare indeed to get them as nice as this.


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« Reply #7 on: October 12, 2018, 05:16:08 PM »
Hey Guys. Pretty faultless. And this one sounds closer to how a live band might sound which has been my main beef with some of your earlier songs. You sound more liberated on this track. Its great to listen to.

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« Reply #8 on: October 13, 2018, 10:27:17 AM »
This is phenomenal. For me the chorus should be two lines instead of four, I think it goes on a bit (as good as it is) yet again you guys have produced a brilliant piece of songwriting. Straightforward yet meaningful lyrics, and you know i'm a huge fan of that guitar sound.

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« Reply #9 on: October 14, 2018, 12:52:31 AM »

 Excellent song guys.  ;D ;D

 Love the build and the effortless, smooth guitar playing.
 Put me in mind of Fleetwood Mac ;D ;D

 Great mix and production....of course ;D ;D
 My gasted was flabbered  ;D

 Loved it...

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« Reply #10 on: October 15, 2018, 06:41:50 PM »
Love it - hits the spot - sounds really good and has everything going for it.