[BeadyRoller]

Hi, so last month I released my first single, really interested on any feedback from you guys!

Lyrics:

Love, the route to your heart
Can tear you apart, Can make or break your day

God, is he one of us?
Someone we can trust, That is up for debate

It is good to sit and wonder, about what's happening today
Before it is all too late
Some questions best left unanswered, others might just hold the key
To unlock all life's mysteries

Stand up, fight it
Take them on, have your say
Make you're own mind up
No more hiding, show them all you're not afraid
This is where you're gonna Turn The Page
This is where you're gonna Turn The Page

Friends, they'll come and go
At least then you'll know who you can count on

Wrongs, will not make a right
Learning from the might put you on the right road

It is good to sit and wonder, about what's happening today
Before it is all too late
Some questions best left unanswered, others might just hold the key
To unlock all life's mysteries

Stand up, fight it
Take them on, have your say
Make you're own mind up
No more hiding, show them all you're not afraid
This is where you're gonna Turn The Page
This is where you're gonna Turn The Page.


Cheers!

[RealKevM]

Reminds me a lot of Champagne Supernova (a good thing), lovely chord progression, really great lyrics, Good work mate. I'll sub to you on youtube.

[tfz]

Yeah, very Oasis, but with better lyrics. You've already released it, so I won't suggest changes, and it sounds good as it. Nice work mate.

[rightly]

Nice work.

I'm not a fan of oasis myself.

 (The brother who can write songs n the other, talentless and reluctant but does it anyway. Lol.)

I think you've got enough talent to steer away from and be better than your influences.
I like the phrasing in the melody.