Bill Sauders, thanks yes your right around pitching but I really didn't have any time so its honest 1 take..
TBoswell - 'Lovely verse with a lot of pregnant potential, that sounds great when it returns as a refrain at the end' great feedback
CaliaMoko - 'Kind of eerie but hopeful, optimistic lyrics' thanks they were a bit of a risk and not my normal style
Allan - spot on my lyrical imagery was GoT stuff, not that I've seen it I hasten to add
Dear Count - 'imagine some tasteful spacy guitar solo taking this somewhere' absolutely
Scub, tardis? You have really think hard with this minimalist approach
Pompeyjohn, yes, I had something epic and rocks trilogy or whatever in the back of my mind to go with the imagery Just let me slip into my leather trousers
- x
Paulski, yep sometimes less is more, and I didn't have time to do anything more complicated - necessity is the mother of all inventions..
nooms - thanks man that means a lot
CS - delighted with your feedback on the lyrics - they're a bit different for me and yes liked doing the harmony with loads of reverb :-)