[crystalsuzy]

What an amazing minute of pure listening joy It was just too darn short, but of course that's the comp. 
That chorus is wonderful...the harmonies are beautiful. Great story line as well. 
I think the next comp should be to make a longer song of these shorties. 
Great entry Davy 

[nooms]

good job davy
thought it was white room as it started ..
you manage to have an intro and verse build and really catchy chorus
well compacted mate
you must have attended the ‘john west’ school of songwriting
are you saving the 12 inch for the next album ?

[Binladeda]

 Still Remarkable.  Still stunned 
 Excellent production btw......

[Skub]

@Paulski

Ha! Thanks Paul. 

@crystalsuzy

Wow! Many thanks CS. 

@nooms

I get what you mean on the 'White Room' thing,nooms! The 12 inch will only be a 6 inch. 

@Binladeda

Thanks again,double Gramps. 

[diademgrove]

Its been a while since I last posted. I've discovered painting which seems to be more time consuming than songwriting. Anyway enough of my apologies.

Great song, well sung and produced. My only suggestion would be to have the last "of your time" sang acapella. For me the song would then end on a question mark rather than a full stop.

Its only a minor point so feel free to ignore me if you disagree,

Keith