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my first ever song "kevin"
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RossBagley
Busker
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my first ever song "kevin"
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September 07, 2018, 05:06:24 PM »
this is my first ever beat so don't send hate or anything just what i can do to improve, thanks.
/https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8Hx436oi9go
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CaliaMoko
Stadium Tour
Posts: 3687
Strumming on the couch in pigtails
Re: my first ever song "kevin"
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September 07, 2018, 05:25:50 PM »
@RossBagley
Would you click "modify" below your post and remove the "r" from in front of the link? I can't watch videos on my computer, and I can't get the link to work with the "r" on it on my phone.
Also, if your song has lyrics (I can't tell yet, since I can't watch), I would be grateful if you would add your lyrics to the post, while you're editing it.
Thanks!
Vicki
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You're never too old to try something new.
And I take my own advice: check out my albums:
https://vmgoble.bandcamp.com/
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https://www.deezer.com/en/album/77622062
http://www.soundcloud.com/caliamoko
http://www.facebook.com/LateBloomersStartLater
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