my first ever song "kevin"

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RossBagley

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« on: September 07, 2018, 05:06:24 PM »
this is my first ever beat so don't send hate or anything just what i can do to improve, thanks.
/https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8Hx436oi9go
« Last Edit: September 07, 2018, 05:31:42 PM by RossBagley »

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« Reply #1 on: September 07, 2018, 05:25:50 PM »
@RossBagley  Would you click "modify" below your post and remove the "r" from in front of the link? I can't watch videos on my computer, and I can't get the link to work with the "r" on it on my phone.

Also, if your song has lyrics (I can't tell yet, since I can't watch), I would be grateful if you would add your lyrics to the post, while you're editing it.

Thanks!
Vicki