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Drown in tears

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SqaTTax

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« on: August 22, 2018, 11:30:38 PM »
Hey!
Tried my best to write a song about how lost I am feeling and everything.
I hope to get some feedback on what you think :)

Link for the song:
https://soundcloud.com/im-russel/drown-in-tears

Lyrics for the song

He was so broken
Tryna Pick Pieces Up
He Was Just Hoping that
She could GIve him LOVE
and That Love would Fix him
All they do is talk Yo
they Dont litsen
All he Sees Curses
Where the blessing
He paranoid
Tryna fill the void he Stressing
Drink another Shot
get the pill Dispencer
they Dont really get him
So he killed the friendship
Drinking on his own
throwing up the Mess is
All on the floor
And He Lies on The floor
Feeling like Nothing and he tries to be more
Dead inside and he Lies In the Morge
At a Party but feeling bored

When You try and You try
then you stop
When you cry and you Cry till
the Drops
Run out
and you drown In your tears
Dissaper in the Pain

When You try and You try
then you stop
When you cry and Cry till
the Drops
Run out
and you drown In your tears
Dissaper in the Pain

So Low so we Smoke Just To get High
Percocet Percocet Just To get by
Evrything that we love Always slips by
just like time and we Wish We could rewind
To a time When things really Seemed Like
They would Work out
Now We Burned Down
Every Lil bit of Hope
That we had and
We did things that wish we hadnt
Its a cycle Its a pattern
its all useless
its doent matter
We fall We Shatter
we do our thing from the shadows
Got the Rope and the gallows
See the Crows and the Sparrows
Feel the Knives and the arrows
in my back and My heart now
They Say what goes around
comes back round
We just going round in circles
Dont know what we live \what we work for
used To think we was worth More
now We just dont know no
and we just wanna Go home
Feel so alone

When You try and You try
then you stop
When you cry and Cry till
the Drops
Run out
and you drown In your tears
Dissapear in the Pain

When You try and You try
then you stop
When you cry and Cry till
the Drops
Run out
and you drown In your tears
Dissapear in the Pain


Cheers!

SqaTTax

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« Reply #1 on: August 22, 2018, 11:51:37 PM »
Sorry for all the spelling mistakes..

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« Reply #2 on: August 24, 2018, 12:28:31 AM »
This is really fantastic. I'm not into rap, but I really like it. Lyrics are great. Singing is awesome. Maybe I like rap?! Haha. I'm going to give this a few more listens.

I reposted this and followed you. I think you're brilliant.

Lynn