[Liam]

 This is about a relationship between two people- wrong time , wrong place


Goodbye

Goodbye , goodbye
You ain't gonna see me cry
But I am , but I am
sorry if I'm not the man you thought
but then you ain't either

You've pushed me as far as I can go
I can't meet you no more
I've reached the end
It's gonna be painful I know
but not as painful as staying here

Goodbye , goodbye
You ain't gonna see me cry
But I am , but I am
sorry if I'm not the man you thought
but then you ain't either

I've gotta move along now
I gotta walk out your life
it's not gonna be nice for either of us
I don't want a fuss
don't kiss me it'll just make it worse

Goodbye , goodbye
You ain't gonna see me cry
But I am , but I am
sorry if I'm not the man you thought
but then you ain't either

Maybe we'll meet again one day
I can't promise , I can't say
I know we've both got broken hearts
but you know it's gotta be this way
the sadness I feel won't ever go away

Goodbye , goodbye
You ain't gonna see me cry
But I am , but I am
sorry if I'm not the man you thought
but then you ain't either

[Paulski]

Hi Katie

This is really good.
Great focus on the hook and I like the last line of the chorus stood out nicely - good choice of "either" as a non-rhyming word there.

I thought this section could be improved:

I know we've both got broken hearts
but you know it's gotta be this way
the sadness I feel won't ever go away

It just seemed a bit cliché compared to the rest IMHO.

Good work 
Paul