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LostBoy

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« on: August 03, 2018, 11:38:53 AM »
Hi everyone,

This is the third song that Jambrains & I have worked on together as part of our sexy Sky lanterns project. (We leave the “sexy” off of course as our humility knows no bounds!! ;D plus, it should just be a given....right?? ....no? ...sigh, anyway... ;D)

Any feedback would be awesome and we’d be grateful for. Thanks guys!

https://soundcloud.com/sky_lanterns/sky-lantern

I was done
Took a long hard look in the broken glass
Seven years had finally passed
Think I’m due a change of luck tonight.
I’ve been a statue in the grey
A tonne of concrete on my brain
Just going nowhere, every day looked the same.

Sparks fly fast, we crash, heart first into each other
I cannot remember feeling this good baby
Things are looking up tonight

Take me there in your sky lantern
Hold on tight
Who cares if we don’t know where this is going now baby
I just wanna feel alive/ when I’ve got your hand in mine / by my side
Got a sky full of stars & our beating hearts
Let’s just have some fun enjoy the ride

Heating up
Getting carried away with a midnight kiss
No nothing can come close to this
A million miles away, from where you found me

Stars fly past, we crash heartfirst into each moment
I cannot remember feeling this good baby
Things are looking up tonight
You and I are a sky lantern

Burning bright, higher and higher, you and I
In a world that’s obsessed with what is coming next
We don’t need to know
We take each moment at a time, let’s see what we find

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« Reply #1 on: August 03, 2018, 01:55:50 PM »
I really liked this. There was a band I listened to a LOT back in the day called Del Amitri ? this reminds me of them, great voice, great production and (as someone who has never managed to write one) nice to hear an uplifting / positive song for a change

CaliaMoko

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« Reply #2 on: August 03, 2018, 03:22:26 PM »
I had to listen to this...I didn't notice you had a "Sky Lanterns" project going on. Now I have to find the first two songs and listen to them, too. Caught my eye because of the title. At first I thought someone had found my song from, oh, months ago, maybe a year or so, called "Sky Lanterns". But turns out this one is much better!  :D So I definitely have to find the other two.

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« Reply #3 on: August 03, 2018, 08:23:17 PM »
Hi dude.

Again, another great song and vocal. really like your stuff. Like the structure too.

Pro sound on the production too.

Andy

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« Reply #4 on: August 04, 2018, 01:15:12 PM »
Hey @LostBoy and @Jambrains .... well obviously I'm already a fan so I'll try not go on :)! This is just lovely... As usual the vocals are fantastic and  well needless to say the production is slick, polished and spot on! Great track guys!!

K

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« Reply #5 on: August 04, 2018, 10:46:25 PM »
Such a lovely pop song guys. Superb vocals as we have learned to expect @LostBoy and top notch stuff from @Jambrains .Blimey, you guys are on a roll  :)

LostBoy

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« Reply #6 on: August 06, 2018, 10:53:42 PM »
@Andyb Thanks very much mate! Yep, love Del amitri.  :D

@CaliaMoko Thanks very much Vicki, I’m so glad you like it.  ;D

@Cawproductions cheers as always man!  :D

@monodb ta very much Karen!  :D

@pompeyjazz thanks for listening and commenting mate! I appreciate it.  ;D

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« Reply #7 on: August 07, 2018, 05:37:34 AM »
Have to say I like this very much, the voice is perfect for song and the lyrics are great if I sit around and nitpick too much I will have to to catch a star

LostBoy

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« Reply #8 on: August 11, 2018, 06:38:12 PM »
@lillypilly Thanks so much!! :D

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« Reply #9 on: August 16, 2018, 11:30:25 AM »
Hi Guys,

This is a very classy song. The standard on here is ridiculous....this could be off a pro signed band's album. Vocals are superb and the rest of the song is of a crazy good standard. I liked the piano part particularly and the change at 2.40 was perfectly judged. What a wonderful piece of writing and production. Has to be a contender for SOTM.

M

LostBoy

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« Reply #10 on: August 16, 2018, 05:11:49 PM »
@montydog Thanks so much Alan!! That’s very kind of you mate. We are having a great time writing together as we both love doing the parts that the other one hates! I hate doing the music and mix and Jam would rather not write or sing (even though he’s a bloody good writer aswell!) Cheers again mate.  ;D

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« Reply #11 on: August 16, 2018, 05:43:56 PM »
That's a really great song and superb production -  very high quality - great piano, brilliant vocals.

At the end of the chorus, I did find the note you use behind the lyric "the ride" it a little surprising (the fifth not the root, I think?) but maybe I'm too predictable in my writing. :)

Wish my demos sound 10% as good!

cheers
Dave

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« Reply #12 on: August 24, 2018, 12:17:02 AM »
This is calling out for a video. Actually, I could see this being the end song in a film, playing as the credits roll. Sounds totally professional on all levels.

Lynn

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« Reply #13 on: September 02, 2018, 08:47:13 PM »
Hi!

All the songs you share on this page is so well done!
Again, this one "Sky Lantern" is no exception.
Outstanding chorus!
You got yourself a new fan.

All the best
Tor Løvstad

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