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Magical Tree (Demo)

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Altair

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« on: July 31, 2018, 03:01:24 PM »
Hi!
I am a young (?) songwriter from Russia and I now I'm trying to write some lyrics in English for my songs. English is not my native language though.
My music style is pop, indie-rock, ballads.

I’ll be very grateful if you read (proofread) my lyrics, show me any mistakes or give me any comments and recommendations (stylistics, rhyming, grammar, use of word, etc.) Maybe you say that something sounds bizarre and unnatural.

I am not very ambitious about that. I want to record a good demo in order to attract attention, find companions and co-authors.

Sorry for poor arrangement of demo track. Vocal line is shown with a sax voice.

https://soundcloud.com/user-72483902/magical-treedemo