[jonlint]

Hi all,

Working on an Alternative Rock song idea.  Here is the complete song first draft - needs a car mix test and some refinement.  Feedback welcome on what I have so far:

https://soundcloud.com/jonathan-linton-3/reality-rev3

REALITY
(Words by Jonathan Linton, Music by Jonathan Linton)

You’re mystified
Why they can’t see
Your point of view
Your reality
 
You’re blinded by
What you can see
You see right through
Their reality

Time to change
Your perception range
Perception……….
Is reality

Should wake you up
When nobody
Listens to you
Your philosophy

Open your eyes
And you will see
What others think
Their reality

Time to change
Your perception range
Perception……….
Is reality

SOLO

Time to change
Your perception range
Perception……….
Is reality

[Mella]

Very cool, I love the energy! The message is great also. I would boost the bass a little as the current mix seems to be a lot of high-end, but other than that I like it a lot!

[mickyplankton]

Cool Lyrics. i agree with Mella. Bass is low. So are the vocals. the guitar totally dominates presently. Time to change your EQ range 😁