Hi guys,
I'm thinking of applying for a fellowship grant through my local government, and have to submit three solo songs. What do you think about this one?
Thanks so much for your feedback. It will be really helpful.
Oh, there's a swear word. Sorry. Haha.
Lynn
New version here:
Listen to The Caged Bird version 2 by faraway my lovely #np on #SoundCloud
https://soundcloud.com/user-468459034/the-caged-bird-version-2Listen to the caged bird by faraway my lovely #np on #SoundCloud
https://soundcloud.com/user-468459034/the-caged-birdThrough the bars the future looks so clear
She doesn't know there's a pain of glass in there
It seems like time just passes through like light
Maybe soon she will take a flight
But the caged bird can't fly
The caged bird only wonders why
The sun rises every day
But still she can't fly away
In the dark the room becomes a maze
As shadows fall, an unfamiliar gaze
He thought that he could save his little dove
But he was trapped inside his own cage of love
And the caged bird can't fly
The caged bird only wonders why
The sun rises every day
But still she can't fly away
Through the bars the future looks so clear
Like time has stopped the hour, the day, the year
But cages can't hold in her songs of love
She sings to him, he hears his little dove
The caged bird can sing
Cages can't hold everything
Can't stop the future being bright
Can't stop her ****** dreams of flight