Hi there, I like your guitar picking and harmonic singing.
I have read the comments above about the lack of variety, and understand that and I think that's maybe because each line of the verse carries the same melody. In the chorus, you use three lines the same melodically (roughly) but then lift it on the fourth line and this is nice ear candy. That said, the repetitive element is kind of hypnotic too.
Interesting artist - I will check out more of your stuff!
I agree with Michaela here.
I'm fine with the repetitive melody.
With this there's a build up of tension and eventually there's release.
Excellent lyrics and resonating theme.
Living in Cages, the more you think of it the further you get with it.
Living in a society cages are absolutely necessary, but too much can be fatal to the spirit.
Also excercising self restraint, to hold back from expedient gratification and rewards because you're after something better.
It's a very fine song.