[ThomasThomas]

Hi,

I wrote a song for fun. What do you think about it? 

The lyrics are also in the video

Thomas.

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no one is ever
so sure to say never
i've seen em raise up as they fell

Known by the trouble
amidst in the rubble
I sleep to the music of stars

In every way
I look back in disbelief
a moment to pray
for glittering eyes
and the beauty of relief

Used to be busy
awakened and dizzy
the demons came flooding my house

Rhythms repeating
a solemn heart beating
I reached for the wind in your hair

In every way...

Torn in the middle
my mind was a riddle
a prison of dreams and despair

down in the river
the stream makes me shiver
a child is a child in a song

In every way...

So come look right through me
and I'll be your's truly
I'll sing at the top of my lungs

No one is ever... 

[CaliaMoko]

Despair mixed with hope and optimism. Quiet, peaceful sound. Soothing repetitious musical theme. Were you sitting in a squeaky chair when you recorded this??? 

Welcome to the forum! Have you been here long? I am interested in hearing a little bit about you, your past experience with song writing, and maybe your thoughts related to this song?

Vicki

[ThomasThomas]

Dear Vicki

Thank you for your view on the song. I just came here. I have very little experience with song writing, this is my only song so far - well, in fact I wrote a second song too.

The song is about, well, just as you described, despair mixed with hope. Or perhaps rather, having found a hope and moving on, looking back and hopefully looking forward, I suppose.

Thomas