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« Reply #15 on: July 29, 2018, 05:50:16 PM »
Good lyrics .....really poignant.

Love how you added hooks to the backing to the lyrics....clever.

Leaves me want to listen again.

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« Reply #16 on: July 31, 2018, 03:08:51 PM »
Hi Rightly,

Great vocals, loved the arrangement especially the horns. This reminded me of 80's indie pop which is a very good thing. The song is brilliantly put together and so original with some lovely warm touches. I loved the drums BTW.

I have no nits - this is such a bleedin' brilliant piece - I absolutely loved it.

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« Reply #17 on: July 31, 2018, 04:42:53 PM »
Hi Rightly,

Great vocals, loved the arrangement especially the horns. This reminded me of 80's indie pop which is a very good thing. The song is brilliantly put together and so original with some lovely warm touches. I loved the drums BTW.

I have no nits - this is such a bleedin' brilliant piece - I absolutely loved it.

M

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yeh!
thanks! always a thrill to see, read words of appreciation from you really talented guys.

I really like this version too.
it was only meant as a demo (I shouldn't have posted it), something for others to work on.
Another version, with other singerS is well underway.
There's also a better version I do on my own.

Such a damn simple song.
I wrote it to distract myself from a pointless depression.
I was marching through town with my guitar and one beer after another
took about 4 (only) hours . Then into cubase.

Look out for those other versions.

Thanks for the feedback!

It's either this or that, then again it might be the other. 

I can promise you a future of slow decline.

Don't eat the yellow snow

And there you have it. 

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