Great suggestions. My biggest worry is that the melody is going to sound cliche. I'll work on the lines in questions. It's in my DAW titled I own the moon. I like that title better, too.
I see so many ways to rewrite it's clogging the mind:
Closing my eyes I breathe your smile
My heart sings lullabies
Hypnotic and enchanting
A love that purifies
or
My rocket heart flames bright
or
My heart just liquifies
or
I see dancing dragonflies
or
this love song amplifies
or
unifies, intensifies, solidifies
Decisions, decisions. I must be indecisive today. Maybe not a good day to put my mind to this task.