[katiewilson1]

Inspired by listening to Oasis- this is the strength that their songs give me

Which song is it though ?

Walk tall

Are you gonna let the day beat you
look in the mirror and say "fuck this "
or are you gonna grab life by the balls
go out there and change things

See the thing that I'm trying to say to you
you're the only one who can change things yeahhh
hide away and never show yourself

all you need  is the knowledge
that you gotta be yourself
are you gonna go back to bed and cry
or change your life forever

are you gonna look back with regrets
about the days that you never met
I know it ain't easy but you gotta do it
get into the world and walk tall

everyday's a struggle , life's a fucking muddle
don't you think that we all feel like that
you gotta walk tall, walk tall

you gotta walk tall, walk tall
you gotta walk tall, walk tall
you gotta walk tall, walk tall
you gotta walk tall, walk tall

[Paulski]

Hi Katie

I like this - good hook and I like the attitude - pull your f-ing socks up! 
I would like to see the hook earlier - maybe a chorus after the first three-line pre-chorus?

Good work 
Paul

[katiewilson1]

Thanks Paul - I'm not all that clued up on hooked and pre-chorus I just write how it comes out

I can only write listening to songs