Hi guys!
I need some feedback on this song I have finished.
I love u, gbye
All this time
Ive been walking alone
Never looked back
Never went home
I kept shoutin “where are ya, mom?”
She was nowhere to find
I looked everywhere, anywhere, but she was nowhere
I kept walking
My world started to go down
Wanted to go back
But didnt know how
I just kept talking
But had noone to talk to
Noone
Except you
You never answered
Thats when I knew
I was alone
Alone in my own world
Kept saying one word (mom)
Time passed by
I was too high to realize
The only thing i said was
I love u, goodbye
As i walked
The wind blew my face
I just thought
That this was my fate
To be alone
To have no home
I heard a voice
It was you
You were always there
But it was me
I didnt hear
You grabbed my hand
Pulled me back
From all the drugs
You pulled me back
From all the theft
You pulled me back
You saved my life
I came home
All you said was
I love u, welcome
It has been a year now
I still cry whenever its around
You made me grateful
For what I have
You helped me through
Everything that went bad
Everytime i come home
All i say is
I love u, mom
Thanks for reading! Sorry for bad english btw, but I’m trying to so my best.
- SqaTTax
