Vickie, you're so right. I do have a problem with 'that.' I'm trying to look at it as a placeholder for something more concrete and descriptive. Thank you so much for you suggestions. I'm very forgiving of bad grammar because of my abysmal punctuation.
Wait a minute, where's the bad grammar? lol I hadn't noticed! And thank you for bringing my attention back to this song. It's been sitting on the sidelines for a couple of weeks now while I worked on other projects. Truth is, I wrote about seven songs last week that now beg for my attention. I'd completely forgotten I posted this one.
As for the bloom, I was using it as a verb, as the blossom blooms. Maybe it's confusing or redundant. I'll cycle it through a few times later when my head clears up. It was beastly hot here yesterday while we were attending an outdoor concert. It's left me feeling a bit drained and foggy. Hot summer days are my arch nemesis. They turn me into a jumbled puddle of goo.