[francisandthefox]

If I still find her
Somewhere in between the blurred
Streets of this blue blue city
I’ll take all of my feelings
And burn them in the night
I’ll stop time and make things right

If I still find her
Waiting for a bus that leads to nowhere
I’ll break down the engine and start a new beginning
From nowhere to somewhere
It doesn’t matter where we go
As long as we’re getting there together

Sometimes Things happen for a reason
sometimes without a meaning
Who knows If tomorrow will be the same
Who knows what will stay
Of all the rain from the night before
Of all the stories on our tongues
Of all the worlds hidden inside
I just need to find her
To stop the time and make things right

If I still find her
Painting pictures by the river
I’ll sing out the hidden corners of my heart
And Pour it out, just pour it out
like cheap whiskey on the rocks

I’ll take her hand and run outside
Looking for things we’ve never found before
We might end up chasing wolves
Or we might get caught up
At the end of the world.

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I think it needs a proper structure and maybe a bit more of a change since it feels quite static although there are several lines that I like. Any suggestions?

[katiewilson1]

I liked this and had a go at giving it some structure it's a big long but I didn't want to lose anything

If I can still find her

V1
Sometimes Things happen and we don't know why
sometimes without a meaning
Who knows If tomorrow will be the same
Who knows what will stay and what will go
of the rain from the night before
of the stories on our tongues
of the world hidden inside

Chorus
If I can still find her
Somewhere in between the blurred streets 
of this big blue city
I’ll take all of my feelings
And burn them - in the nightttt
I’ll stop time and make things rightttt

V2
I just need to find her
To stop the time and make things right
If I can still find her , oh if I can still find her
Painting pictures by the river
I’ll sing out the hidden corners of my heart
And Pour it out, just pour it out to her
like cheap whiskey on the rocks

Chorus
If I can still find her
Somewhere in between the blurred streets 
of this big blue city
I’ll take all of my feelings
And burn them - in the nightttt
I’ll stop time and make things rightttt

V3
If I can still find her
Waiting for a bus that leads to nowhere
I’ll break down the engine and begin again
From nowhere to somewhere
It doesn’t matter where
As long as we’re  together

Chorus
If I can still find her
Somewhere in between the blurred streets 
of this big blue city
I’ll take all of my feelings
And burn them - in the nightttt
I’ll stop time and make things rightttt

V4
I’ll take her hand and run outside
Looking for things we’ve never found before
We might end up chasing wolves
Or we might get caught up
At the end of the world.

Oh if I can still her
Oh if I can still her
Oh if I can still her
Oh if I can still her
Oh if I can still her