Hey Das,
Not sure if we've crossed paths before, so nice to meet yah if not - and great to see your embracing the competition!
Glad I scrolled down to find your lyrics too, what craftmenship you have there. And damn it's fully relatable to, I'm sure, lots of us. Get me the F*** out of here so I can get to "Now you know that love will be the measure of your life" xD
Haven't heard your original but you must have some talent to rework this in so perfectly, would never have guessed. As other have said your vocals really great too, no faff, no gimmicks, feels like you're just doing it without a care yet seemlessy falls together into a very enjoyable melody and range.
Will be keeping an ear out!
Cheers dude,
Scott.