Not quite sure what to make if this to be honest. Perhaps it feels a bit samey, and doesn't really develop as a story. Most versus, and the chorus, follow the same concept of holiday good, leaving now and that sucks. It might work better to focus on the good things about the holiday for two versus, then a line in the chorus asking why do you feel bad? Then perhaps use a mid 8, or the last chorus to explain that, it's because you're going home?
Just a thought, and may disagree.
Mike