[Morefrog Jones]

Hi,
Been away for a while looking after a sick partner so apologies for lack of reviews etc.
Just starting to get back to normal so thought I would finish off one of my many unfinished projects.
It's called 'Love's Played A Joke On Me'

https://soundcloud.com/morefrog-jones/loves-played-a-joke-on-me-demo


Lyrics
You deal in beautiful illusions - I deal in wrong conclusions.
I deal with the consequences - Cant keep on building fences with you.
You gave me apprehensions - No time for second guessing now.
I didn't see it coming - but you've made a fool of me some how.

Now my heart has caught up with my mind
The fog has begun to subside
All the dreams died that you promised.
I loved last
You laughed the longest

Loves played a joke on me
Loves played a joke on me
Where the hell was cupid did he have a bad day?
Its a sick kind of humour that sent you my way.
Theres one new fool born everyday
Because loves played a joke on me.

Disappointment stalks me - like a mischievous shadow
Mocking me as I go - the star of my own side show.
I cant work out my next move - whats the lesser of two evils?
I dont know whats coming next - But I dont want to see the sequel.

I saw all your promises bounce
Nothing seemed to happen by chance
All your feelings were all on account.
You were laughing all the way to the bank.

Loves played a joke on me
Loves played a joke on me
Where the hell was cupid did he have a bad day?
Its a sick kind of humour that sent you my way.
Theres one new fool born everyday
Because loves played a joke on me.

[SlavaB]

Hi Morefrog Jones,

A little bit straight start. Nice vocal and bass guitar. Back vocal at 1:52 onwards and at 3:01 comes at the same volume as your main vocal and creates a little distortion should I say?! Overall is a good idea for a tracks, but I would remove or would bring volume down of that back vocal.

Cheers.
Slava B.

[Skub]

Yo MoFo Jo.

Good to here that Stones vibe still shining bright!

I'm into short songs these days,so it may be just me,but I'd have ended the song shortly after 3 mins.

[PaulyX]

Some great lines in those lyrics ... I like the one about Cupid having a bad day in particular.
It's got a good dance-rock energy throughout. 
I wasn't sure the female backing vocals towards the end fitted though (was that a sample? felt like it was in a different key to me).
Groovy guitar overlays towards the end.
Overall I liked it a lot, certainly had my foot a-tapping... would like to hear it loud.
Welcome back MFJ, you return bearing gifts.