Thanks to everyone for their feedback on this track so far...really appreciate it.
Recognise its not every ones cup of tea style wise..
Personally, I've always felt that chords and melody are what make a great song...not production..thats just the final veneer. I could imagine any song I write being performed/produced in almost any style. I could certainly hear this song being performed in a fairly heavy rock style.
In any case, I thought I'd post the stripped back version that perhaps gives the chords and melody more space and room to breathe in the hope that it might have further appeal.
Anyway, thanks again..greatly appreciate your thoughts.