Hi All,
I originally posted this track in WIP a couple of months ago and got some great feedback from Pompey Jazz, Cowparsleyman and PaulAds. The feedback was comprehensive but the main takeaway for me was that it needed some EQ work. - The original was too low end.
Ive been using Garageband for years but didnt realise there is a very crude method of EQ where you can alter the levels of treble and bass in the mix. So this and did and here is the largely finished product. This is probably the last song i will publish with my existing set up. An IPad 2, and Garageband version 9 (or so). My Ipad is now technically obsolete as Apple now longer support it with updates to the operatiing system. This has a knock on effect as to my ability to use the latest version of Garageband and Dropbox which means i cant accept any offer of help for mixing or mastering which is very frustrating. Im probably going to stick with Ipads and Garageband now that i know there is an EQ set up on the latest version.
Anyhow, heres the updated song. Thanks in advance for comments on any aspect of this
https://soundcloud.com/mickyplankton/seven-hills-of-santiago-demo-2Seven Hills and Twelve Tain Men
What i have seen, Never again,
Keepsake me in your locket
Picture of you in my wallet.
That was all that remainded of the fire
That burned so bright, keeping warmth on the dark Night
My Wallet is now long gone.
Stolen on the Lost Heroes.
Question if you mind if i must
if the battle is to be won.
Then what must be lost?
And you become a living Husk
Your shit out of luck.