Hey all,
So im writing a new piece for my ex. Turning into Taylor swift over here lol.
Its a take me back song as we are still in contact and had talks of getting back together already as we both still have feelings for each other that much is clear.
So back story is:
We met in September and was together almost 8 months. At the start it was intense was in love right away and it was going so well then that died down a bit when he felt cause i didnt sleep over he felt he wasn't in a real relationship but kept going christmas i got everything i wanted and he spent a lot of his money treating me to everything in between. I got lazy and took a lot for granted. Even in march when i was homeless i had to move in but by that point i wanted to. First week was okay and even though he had just moved in over christmas he wasnt ready for me to move in but he accepted it and never argued about it but other arguments arised because i didnt understand things or listen to him. I was lazy with the house work and the relationship died to the point we stopped sharing the bed and then it was over. We broke up and almost instantly it gave me a huge wake up call and i understood everything immediately but he was gone. Were still broken up but talks of getting back together but were both so happy at the moment and totally beaming as friends almost how it was in september and talking of the possibility of getting back together.
So i wrote him a song before with yodasdad having like 90% of the input of it and he sang and produced it now owns the finished song.
I want to write another saying how im already changed and how i will continue to be better. That i'll spend every day proving why im so lucky to have him and how im sorry for all the things i did. I wanted to call it "Back to september" then i came up with the title "Ember" now am sat on the beach with a clear mind and i have two verses that needs a second input, almost like yodasdad helped with. A co writer again to aid me. But im sat here with two rough verses and no title cause neither fits now. Please help
This is what i have so far, its very rough but says a lot already. Just needs slightly re-wording and im stuck for a chorus. This is it..
V1?
Love is never easy, i know that much to be true,
But i can't hide this feeling that i have for you.
I ain't asking for forgiveness, im just looking for a second chance,
To spend a lifetime, proving why im so lucky that you're mine.
V2?
I took so much for granted, but i understand it all now,
And i just hope its not to late to turn it all around,
I don't know what the future hold, but if we walk hand in hand,
We can find out together and you'll be my man.
Chorus here. Its a slow song up to here at the chorus i want it to be like
The bridge where it will pick up and tempo change towards the end.
So yeah.. that's what i have so far. All help and input will be much appreciated.
Thank you,
Kieron.