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I have a chorus…maybe…I guess…

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Miss Stagefright

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« on: May 08, 2018, 01:53:13 PM »
Locked away in the dark
One more day, one more mark
Locked away in solitude
A life of servitude



Idk what the story is so if you've got any suggestions, I'm all ears
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« Reply #2 on: May 08, 2018, 05:03:21 PM »
Make it about Elizabeth Fritzl?

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« Reply #3 on: May 08, 2018, 05:31:34 PM »
She's been married to him forever and he doesn't really know her. He hasn't listened to her for so long that she doesn't bother to tell him how sad and alone she feels. She watches the days, months, and years passing, hoping for someone to come and save her, because she doesn't know how to leave.




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« Reply #4 on: May 15, 2018, 12:00:27 AM »
Hi it's how I feel sometimes when I can't be Katie xxx

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« Reply #5 on: May 21, 2018, 02:36:25 AM »
Maybe she has been missing an ex and wishes that the sunlight will caress her again with the reignition of the love they had?