Silent tears (Lostboy & Jambrains)

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Cawproductions

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« Reply #15 on: May 13, 2018, 08:28:48 AM »
Guys,

This is good, Vocal on this is pro, well done there.

All round a really nice song, builds really nice, pulling you in slowly...love the chorus parts, Good energy.

Arrangement is spot on. Production sounding good here too.

Thumbs up from me...

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« Reply #16 on: May 13, 2018, 12:35:40 PM »
Hi Guys,


Strong performances by both of you.
Quite epic in its own right - like a stripped down stadium anthem from the 80s.

Sounds sincere, which is a not a thing that can be said about a lot of chart music these days.

I wasn't quite sure about the vocal change around 2.36. Had to listen back a few times - and maybe it does. The more you listen the more it seems right.
Nice outro.

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« Reply #17 on: May 13, 2018, 12:42:37 PM »
Fantastic job on this...I don't think songwriters and performers can do much more than you've done here...you just keep your fingers crossed that it gets picked up and you get the recognition and audience it deserves.
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« Reply #18 on: May 13, 2018, 06:03:28 PM »
Well guys, you have just smashed this right out of the park. It sounds pro quality. Amazing vocals and instrumentation. Not a lot more to say. It's as radio ready as you can get imo

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« Reply #19 on: May 20, 2018, 10:36:29 AM »
 
 Wow, you nailed this one guys.....

 Great performance...easy to see you both on stage in front of
 1000's of cigarette lighters ;D ;D Outstanding vocals and arrangement.
 Especially liked the transition at 2-20.....smooooth ;D ;D

 If anything, it was that the gtr solo was a bit 'predictable'.....but I
 suppose it has to be with this style.

 Top class work guys.....loved it, a joy to listen to on a Sunday morning ;D
 thx

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« Reply #20 on: May 20, 2018, 04:56:41 PM »
Amazing!!! Good luck at The Grammy's!!!!

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« Reply #21 on: June 17, 2018, 06:07:27 PM »
This collab business between you two guys seems to work so, so well. This is a top quality piece of work IMO. superb vocals and the famous jambrains arrangement. Thought it was excellent

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« Reply #22 on: June 17, 2018, 06:54:08 PM »
I'm loving the vocal....and the solo of course.

It's a moving song for sure....second listen i was really getting going with it...a great job you've done here guys....very impressed with the whole thing (even if it isn't my bag really!).

Good work boys!
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« Reply #23 on: June 18, 2018, 03:24:33 AM »
This song is absolutely incredible. Reminds of the music you don't hear much anymore, but wish you did.
Let music bring us all together.

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« Reply #24 on: June 18, 2018, 02:55:24 PM »
Hi guys,excellent collaboration, every element works. no nits to pick from me! Great vocals, playing, build instrumentation and production....did I miss anything?
Really pro sound guys well done!
Cheers
Jamie

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« Reply #25 on: June 19, 2018, 08:26:53 AM »
Wow this is beautiful!!!

Love the vocals and production.

This is very high quality all around and such a great song.

I'm very, very impressed!!

Micky

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« Reply #26 on: June 23, 2018, 01:08:32 AM »
Hi guys

Really good collab here - excellent vocals and the piano/guitar work really stood out for me too.
As far as suggs, I agree with antmanB and Adam (and Alan) on those lyric lines. I thought the melody could have been catchier and wanted harmonies later in the song but maybe that's old-school thinking.  ;D ;D

Good stuff!
Paul

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« Reply #27 on: June 23, 2018, 07:55:44 AM »
Guys,
Looking forward to this, and you deliver.
I think the intro is very strong. The piano provides a great backdrop for the lyrics, I like the ambiguity there and Leo's fabulous vocals.
Impeccable production, super solo ( dead jealous ).
Only suggestion I have is we appear to lack backing vocals, which I think should come after the solo over the chorus.

Complex emotional and epic is what I heard. Looking forward to the next instalment
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