Mmm....don't know if I'd call it a song
At the moment it's 'scary'
.....in many ways
Some drums would help, or a beat of some sort......
If it's an artistic installation you are presenting, then I'm
afraid the message is lost on me. However, I'm fully aware
of my own influences and prejudices, so whether I understand,
or like something is unimportant. What is important is that all
artistic endeavour should be encouraged. Especially here
So, I would like to thank you for this artistic event. Your music
interested and engaged me enough to write all this. On that level
it is very good
. But as a song, well.......Mmmm
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