MY SEVENTH DEMO TRACK "I FEEL ALIVE"

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Robbie S

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« on: April 23, 2018, 10:26:50 AM »

 Hi folks,

Following on from recent helpful posts I have a clear lyrical theme for this song.

This song is set around the night a young couple decide to run away together from their strict conservative rural environment. Using the analogy of a space ship hidden in a barn instead of a car helps to bring a sense of inspiration and hope as they reach for the stars.

My good friend Dave Dorgan produced this demo and played / programmed all the instruments.

We've had some interest in this track from a major record label who want to buy for use in film and television.
The will provide a drummer to lay down real drums and I will be re-recording the vocal in a London studio.

They've asked us to drive it more towards a Crowded House feel, any ideas?


https://soundcloud.com/user-53270383/i-feel-alive



I FEEL ALIVE

Grab your bags, it’s time to go.
The moon is full, now we’ll run away
I won’t be tied done anymore. No No

Take my hand baby let’s  head for the stars

I feel  alive
We’re gonna smash the sky
I feel  alive


Break down those old barn doors
No one can stop us now
Rockets are primed and loaded
It’s time to leave this world behind



Climb the steps and close the door
Hearts beating fast lift off is close
The countdown begins no turning back

Take my hand baby let’s head for the stars

I feel alive
We’re going to smash the sky
I feel alive

Kick down the barn doors
No   one can stop us now
The rockets are firing up
It’s time to leave this world behind

We’re never going to go back to that place again
We’re never going to go back to that place again
We’re never going to go back to that place again
We’re never going to go back home