Hey Rightly
I liked the swooping strings on this a lot. And the line "soon she will know me... better", that's a bit sinister and lends the lyrics an edge.
For your stuff this one felt slightly more conventional to me. I think I'm in the "could do with more variation in the second half" camp but I can see from your comments you've already decided that's not what you want to do with this one, so respect for that.
Your voice sounds close to John Martyn on this to me. (I expect you've had that one before?)
Well maybe you're right, I could made some change in the second or third third, but there's no way I wanted a structural changes. Decoration, if anything.
John martyr, eh?
Yes I've had it before, checked him out n forgot him.
I hope he's good.
There's a place where my voice falls apart and indisputably fails, but don't tell anyone. . .
"they say only time.'
I ran out of steam.
I don't know exactly why it was so difficult to sing.
And it vexes me, no end.
I can do it better now. . . And worse. . .
Hmm. Next time.
Oh, it's certainly not my intention to be unconventional.
I do like this chord progression.
