Under the Weather

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Jack_Diamond.

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« on: April 14, 2018, 10:11:47 PM »
https://jackdiamond.bandcamp.com/releases

This is an accidental repost i can't seem to delete. sorry
« Last Edit: April 19, 2018, 02:16:19 PM by Jack_Diamond. »

SlavaB

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« Reply #1 on: April 19, 2018, 08:49:21 AM »
Hi Jack,

I hope you doing well. I'm sorry but listening to your tracks you giving me an understanding that you are the most quite person in the world lol. :) Please take it as joke.

Overallssss in regards to this particular track- Well written, but a little bit monotone, try to make varieties  within a track, change chord progression, add some extra background guitar that will fingerpicking the same chord progression ( For example you have a soundtrack called "Leasowe Beach" you did brought a variety there and this is what I'm talking about. As far as I understood you don't want to use drums / beats on your music ? If you don't, then this really takes out of the "box" should I say, this is what makes to stand out from other?

Thank you for sharing your work.
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Slava B.

Rick trodat

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« Reply #2 on: April 19, 2018, 12:20:57 PM »
I really enjoy this. The production kinda helps with the flow of the song.

Really nice!