[samturneraudio]

Okay so I've only just found this group and I'm keen to get involved with what's going on here so I'm going to have a good listen to other tracks and offer my opinion.
I've been writing songs for the past few years with my songwriting partner and just never managed to get our tracks into the right hands and we always like to hear feedback on our tracks. This is one of our first, enjoy!

This one isn't really a lyrically song per say but here they are.

Sensations running up and down my spine
Sensations trigger me every time
x2

Satisfy me, satisfy my mind
Make me lovesick and make me blind
x3

Sensations running up and down my spine
Sensations trigger me every time

Let's go home tonight,
I've got this all figured out
Come with me
Come home tonight
I'll set this all right
Come...

[Mike67]

Hi Sam,

Love the song; not a million miles away from the stuff I'm currently working on with my writing partner.  Nice dreamy vibe, which lends itself to the subject matter and lyrics. Nice work.

[samturneraudio]

Hi Sam,

Love the song; not a million miles away from the stuff I'm currently working on with my writing partner.  Nice dreamy vibe, which lends itself to the subject matter and lyrics. Nice work.

Thanks very much for your kind words, really appreciated. Just checked out your stuff on SoundCloud, great work!

[RealKevM]

I really liked this, good job mate.

[Cawproductions]

Hi Sam.

Welcome to the Forum, Nice track, lovely smooth vocals, track is dreamy,

Cheers
Andy

[Sterix]

Hi. welcome to the forum.

It's nicely done. Not my usual listening but I quite liked it.

[Movin Flavour]

Nice chill out tune .

Has a great hook.

Like this a lot.


Sandeep

[Mikey]

Nice track, well produced and performed, I like the dreamy quality, a good track to chill out to.

Welcome to the forum, Mikey

[LostBoy]

Welcome to the forum dude! I enjoyed your track a lot, I like the chilled vocals and the old school video gamish sound of the hook. Great stuff! I did think that the background “ooooooooh” in the first verse was too loud &possibly in the second aswell, but that’s a small nit.

[pompeyjazz]

Nice trippy feel. Sounds like you know your way around the preduction stuff.  My only crit would be was the verses sounded very similar to the choruses. Of course that can work but just an observation. Great first submission 

[PaulyX]

Hi, welcome.
I thought this had a nice 'Ibiza chilled beach house' type vibe. It was starting to get a bit samey for me just before the breakdown but then you rescued it with a couple of new twists. Well produced.
Hope you get involved and enjoy the forum.

[tboswell]

Sam,

Welcome!

Really well produced first effort, some lovely effects in the production. You boys obviously know what you are doing.
I think there could be some sharper edges to the song, some stops, some sharper contrasts between the sections. That would be more of a pop requirement and maybe that is not what you are going for...

If you say what you are trying to achieve with your track it is easier for everyone to comment constructively.

Anywho, a really good listen and first track up. 

Tom.