Love the voice, which is pure rock. Song's great too, but I'd suggest a few tweaks. Shorten the intro to 30 secs max and move the solo to just before the bridge, then end on the chorus. That would be bit more predictable, but good to finish this one on the chorus. Great work.
Hi Mike,
Thanks for the feedback. I was thinking the same thing. Managed to write a second verse and improve the mix a bit - still with the "old" structure. Will probably shorten the intro and add a chorus at the end. Here is the complete lyrics:
LIAR
(Words by Jonathan Linton, Music by Jonathan Linton)
You got a good disguise
But we can see through your eyes
Pressure’s getting higher
We can see you’re a liar
You’ve fooled me way too longer
You’re weak, but I am strong
Yeah
You’re a liar
Yeah
Such a liar
You took us for a ride
Inflamed, exploited divide
Who next will you fire
To rush ahead and hire
You’ve fooled me way too longer
You’re weak, but I am strong
Yeah
You’re a liar
Yeah
Such a liar
SOLO
https://soundcloud.com/jonathan-linton-3/liar