[Robbie S]

Hi folks,

Hope you are well and enjoying more snow, there's plenty here in Somerset today!

Please take a gander at my latest demo.

I wrote it as a homage to Stephen Hawking, I've tried to do something different with this song, away from my previous efforts, more disco, maybe.

I like the chorus, then I think it stinks, then I like it again, this is a weird one for me.

Wy wife had a listen just after I finished it and I was like "Please stop playing it, it's doing my head in"

Does anyone else have that emotion just after finishing a song, that you think it's crap and you don't want to listen to it ever again?


Feedback and critic most welcome.

https://soundcloud.com/user-53270383/beautiful-mind

"Beautiful Mind"

You’re coming from a different place
A diamond flawed
Against the odds       

You’re coming from outa space 
Quantum theories
In your face

They say never give it up
Never give it up

Beautiful mind, beautiful mind, beautiful mind

You’re chasing stars again
Force of Nature
Flying High

Show me the truth my friend
Blinding light
In you’re your eyes

They say never give it up
Never give it up

Beautiful mind,  a beautiful mind,  a beautiful mind, a beautiful mind

[Johnnyuk]

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[Robbie S]

Thanks Johnny

You're got a point and from someone who is writing a lot of good music at the moment, I'm really grateful for the time you've put into this response.

I guess lyrics are my last point of effort in the process, I'm actually in touch with a lyric writer and form you're feedback and looking at my latest demo, I'll post it soon, I think I should try and give it shot with her words!

You've actually pushed me to do this, which is something I've been putting of for a while, thanks dude and keep the songs coming, you're doing good work!

[Johnnyuk]

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