Hi
latest song I'm working on.
It's a bit autobiographical, about how I had to move near family, and effects on friends an co-musicians!
The lyrics are below, and I'd be grateful for any view - and feel free to criticise - there are parts I really like, parts I think are OK, other bits I'm not sure about yet, so now's the time to get some input!
You can hear a very rough version here
https://soundcloud.com/dasntn/heading-westward - Not sure the key is right for me, might need to change that.
I wasn’t trying to leave my past, I didn’t want to run away
(But) when life deals you a crooked hand, you know that you just cannot stay
Time had come to join my brother, leave my friends behind
Heading west, a new beginning, a whole new life to find
I never wanted to split us up, I didn’t want to say good bye
But I knew that moving westward, meant leaving you behind
Where the hills roll down to rivers, and rivers flow to the sea
So much rain and misty sunshine, seems a quiet place to be
But there’s always music playing, pouring out from everywhere
Time to sing our songs alone, ‘cos you’re no longer there
Things don’t always go to plan, that saying’s so often true
When I learned that things could change, hope began to brew
Chorus
We’re all travelling to the West, the place we need to be
Leave the crowded towns behind, move down to the sea
Time to find a different voice, make no apology
Heading westward, our next stop, join good company good company
When you said you were moving too, I wondered just what that meant
Heading North to a hillside town, can’t keep paying London rent
Then you spoke about moving down, to check my point of view
Didn’t know life could be that kind, we’ll start our songs anew
I never wanted to split us up, I didn’t want to get away
If there’s a chance to play together, I think you know what I’ll say