Hi there
Please check out my 4th demo track for my project to #WrteAHitSong in 6 months, I'm a third of the way through the mission, the time is flying.
My wife has been having issues with sleep the past few months and that was the inspiration for the song.
I struggled a lot with the lyrics even though I spent a lot of time on them, it is such a different sounding song from the one I started out writing, sure that sounds familiar to some of you.
Personally I think it's got a great opening, good bridge and the chorus good be improved! But I feel I'm getting a better handle on Logic which I only started using 2 months ago.
Instruments used.
Ibanez GIO electric guitar
Sure SM58 microphone
LOGIC Pro
Feedback really helpful going forward...
https://soundcloud.com/user-53270383/insomniaINSOMNIA
Time
It’s Beating Me Up
But I’m Fine
Just Out Of Luck
Life
It’s A Ticking Bomb
So Why
Won’t It Stop
Head’s Are Buzzing, Neon Haze
I’m going underground.
I’m Not Sleeping Much
Just Watching The TV Buzz
Waking Dreams, I Need To Pray
Have I Found The Lost Highway?
Vampires
Knocking At My Door
Share Sweets
Keeps The City Awake