[man of simple pleasures]

hellooo rock n rollers!
been a while so i was thinking i need to get on here and check out some tunes..
so i may aswell put this up for any feedback

rough demo called hijack the kingdom

http://soundcloud.com/man-of-simple-pleasures/hijack-the-kingdom-demo

there's a dragon in my fever
kicking up a calm
before she feeding the storm...

theres an eagle within the empire
who's gonna grab you and
stare at you and stoke up the fire...

cause its high time you
stuck up a fight for love
and its a high crime to
give up the fight on love

theres a prophet to be spoke of
so lets hijack the kingdom
and see what is written?

cause its high time you
stuck up a fight for love
and its a high crime to
give up the fight on love

face the dragon yeah yeah..
find out what you could have sold
pour out your heart and soul
just build your hearts into a single goal...

cause tonight, tonight, we light all the fires...
tonight, tonight, we raise all desires...

http://soundcloud.com/man-of-simple-pleasures/hijack-the-kingdom-demo

cheers!

[Marcus Deso]

Hey man!!


have to say I really liked this - I think the key change needs built up a little bit more.  It's also hard to understand some of the dischordant vocal lines without hearing the guitar fully to understand the contrast.  Looking forward to hearing a scratch track on mic.

[man of simple pleasures]

cheers marcus for listening! i'm well prepared to take a battering on the vocals haha! yeah know you mean with the guitar and vocal done at same time!