Another of my songs, "Girlfriend", recorded by my band. Any feedback or assessment of the song's commercial potential would be appreciated.
I was aiming for a "raw" sound to suit the style of the song: some might reasonably say it is a little too raw.
Thanks for listening
John
https://soundcloud.com/user-829528054/girlfriendGirlfriend, I’m at my wits end, you’re making no sense
When you tell me that you have to let me go now
Don’t make a show now I know you know how
I know the time I spent alone with you
The time spent on the phone with you
I never should have ever let you go
I know the time I spent alone with you
The time spent on the phone with you
I never should have ever let you go
No time like the present, our time is all spent
And there really isn’t anything you could say
We went the wrong way, so have a nice day
And so I’m heading for a slow decline
And out of luck and out of time
I never should have ever let you go
Heading for a slow decline, and out of luck and out of time
I never should have ever let you go
Let me tell you now I’m not just a pretty face
But a memory overload, quickly running out of space
We were heading for a crash, but there’s nothing more that I can do
Still would rather be with you
So let’s break up to start anew, let’s make up, not hard to do
Girlfriend, I’m at my wits end, you’re making no sense
When you tell me that you have to let me go now
Don’t make a show now I know you know how
I know the time I spent alone with you
The time spent on the phone with you
I never should have ever let you go
Let me tell you now I’m not just a pretty face
But a memory overload, quickly running out of space
We were heading for a crash, but there’s nothing more that I can do
Still would rather be with you
So let’s break up to start anew, let’s make up, not hard to do
Girlfriend, I know that you meant to take such offence
This great excuse that seems to be so really heaven-sent
No need to invent, I’m only low-rent
But did you know you cannot reach me now
So please don’t try to teach me now
I never should have ever let you go
But did you know you cannot reach me now
So please don’t try to teach me now
I never should have ever let you go
Never should have ever let you go
Never should have ever let you go