Strong team of horses.

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« on: February 17, 2018, 08:39:40 PM »

         Here's one for our American friends, that are feeling the pinch like some of us over here.

                                        Strong team of horses

                           It's gonna take a strong team of horses
                           To pull this thing around
                           A strong team before we're homeward bound
                           We're a long way from the promised land
                           That someone said we'd found
                           Take a strong team to pull this thing around

                           Hard working mother
                           Kid pulling at her sleeve
                           He wants a baseball glove so he can pitch
                           She has to tell him sorry son
                           The money can't be found
                           They put it in the pockets of the rich

                           Old black man in New Orleans
                           Sits thinking to himself
                           Seems a long time since the hurricane
                           But when i take a look around
                           It could have been just yesterday
                           We're still waiting for the wind of change

                           Gonna take a strong team of horses
                           To pull this thing around
                           A strong team before we're homeward bound
                           We're a long way from the promised land
                           That someone said we'd found
                           Take a strong team to pull this thing around

                           Desperate man in custody
                           For pulling out a gun
                           They took the home he worked so hard to buy
                           While robbing hoods in offices
                           Hide their crooked deals
                           Seems to me they put the cuffs on the wrong guy

                           Look up at old glory
                           Whatever state you're in
                           And ask yourself did we get it right
                           Look up at old glory
                           With a hand upon your heart
                           And tell me do those stars still shine as bright

                           It's gonna take a strong team of horses
                           To pull this thing around
                           A strong team before we're homeward bound
                           We're a long way from the promised land
                           That someone said we'd found
                           Take a strong team to pull this thing around.

                                              Vintage54

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« Reply #1 on: February 19, 2018, 06:14:11 AM »
Love the theme and the 'strong team of horses' line is excellent. That whole verse/chorus that is repeated through ('gonna take a strong team of horses...') is really good.

Did you have a tune in mind already? The only problem I have is that very often the rhythm of the verses don't match up...different number of syllables, .e.g 'Hard working mother' vs 'old black man in new orleans'.


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« Reply #2 on: February 19, 2018, 08:55:50 PM »

         Here's one for our American friends, that are feeling the pinch like some of us over here.

                                        Strong team of horses

                           It's gonna take a strong team of horses
                           To pull this thing around
                           A strong team before we're homeward bound
                           We're a long way from the promised land
                           That someone said we'd found
                           Take a strong team to pull this thing around

                           Hard working mother
                           Kid pulling at her sleeve
                           He wants a baseball glove so he can pitch
                           She has to tell him sorry son
                           The money can't be found
                           They put it in the pockets of the rich

                           Old black man in New Orleans
                           Sits thinking to himself
                           Seems a long time since the hurricane
                           But when i take a look around
                           It could have been just yesterday
                           We're still waiting for the wind of change

                           Gonna take a strong team of horses
                           To pull this thing around
                           A strong team before we're homeward bound
                           We're a long way from the promised land
                           That someone said we'd found
                           Take a strong team to pull this thing around

                           Desperate man in custody
                           For pulling out a gun
                           They took the home he worked so hard to buy
                           While robbing hoods in offices
                           Hide their crooked deals
                           Seems to me they put the cuffs on the wrong guy

                           Look up at old glory
                           Whatever state you're in
                           And ask yourself did we get it right
                           Look up at old glory
                           With a hand upon your heart
                           And tell me do those stars still shine as bright

                           It's gonna take a strong team of horses
                           To pull this thing around
                           A strong team before we're homeward bound
                           We're a long way from the promised land
                           That someone said we'd found
                           Take a strong team to pull this thing around.

                                              Vintage54

You'll remind our American friends of Dylan, I'm sure.

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« Reply #3 on: February 22, 2018, 02:39:01 PM »
Really like this, and agree that strong team of horses is an excellent line. Great writing, and the syllable count must work with the rhythm you have in your head.