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My song: Truth Tea.

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« Reply #15 on: February 22, 2018, 04:11:57 PM »
Dude,

Are you the actual guy from Human league, sound just like him. lol.  This track is a proper throwback to my school days.

I remember when Frankie goes to hollywood (relax) got banned from our school disco for being to rude.....how times have changed.
The stuff my kids listen to now.....and its before 9pm watershed.(I say kids, they are almost adults)

totally captured the feel of the era, nice work.


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« Reply #16 on: February 22, 2018, 08:25:13 PM »
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« Reply #17 on: February 22, 2018, 08:26:07 PM »
Well Johnny, right up my street, engineering and production is good.

All the way through the listen something bothered me, then I got it, BVox, Joanne and Susan Ann, they were conspicious by their absence, it'll sound complete when they go in, I'm sure if you did at least a couple it'll sound much better, have you got something like Melodyne? that can help?

Very precise work, I really like like it.

I do think that the lyric Truth Tea could be more hooky, Dave Mann is right there, it kind of dilutes the punch of the song, I can't relate to truth tea, especially with the imagery in the vid. 'Help me' or 'Enemies, fear me'

Anyway  hope you don't mind.

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« Reply #18 on: February 23, 2018, 10:43:10 PM »
Yes. A Human League, Pulp and Madonna vibe all rolled into one. Nicely done.
Can I buy truth tea in Tescos tomorrow? (Other supermarkets, of course, are available.) My 5 year old son has started fibbing about EVERYTHING this week. Our cat ate a kit kat chunky this morning... :)
Quirky, lots of fun and really well produced. cx
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« Reply #19 on: February 24, 2018, 03:47:03 PM »
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« Reply #20 on: February 25, 2018, 10:21:42 AM »
Hi Johnny,
Good to have you with us and enjoyed the song.

When I saw the title I was a little intrigued as c sounded a mouthful but no worries you pulled it off.
Lots to like hear at it bounces along, enjoyed you vocals too, suited it well.

My only suggestion was in the chorus that you could have gone up an octave on Truth Tea, would have added more impact.
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Neil
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